Haiku Challenge

[wordtamer]

beneath sweet blossoms
her face flushes brilliant red
at the joke he told

first kiss

[Ai Crimson]

Sweet as red cherries
Puts everyone into heaven
Until they forget

Two people at the beach during the night

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the waves kiss warm sand
while soft moonlit silhouettes
tremble with delight

um they're just excited by the stars

fireflies

[Ai Crimson]

...Suuurree.

The light in the dark
Fills a soul with happiness
To be caught in glass

Butterflies

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colored wings flutter
flowers freed from stem and root
to dance on the wind

hmm... not too good but there it is lol...

little girl lashes

[Ai Crimson]

Uh... Eek!

Long dark eyelashes
Frozen all throughout this life
Sways down with movement

I tried at least... And I like your haiku about butterflies.

The worst haiku

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that's a difficult one


i wrote me a haiku
if I could only understand the form
maybe it would com out right at last
is this a good haiku?



robin's eggs

[Ai Crimson]

that's a difficult one


i wrote me a haiku
if I could only understand the form
maybe it would com out right at last
is this a good haiku?



robin's eggs

A beautiful blue
Light as the clean, clear blue sky
Round like an oval

A train

[wordtamer]

Old engine huffing
chugging, tugging down the tracks
the conductor waves

erg...


next: skunk

(liked your robin's egg haiku!)

[Ai Crimson]

The stentch that can kill
All those who look from behind
With a final blow

A rat

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ripe fruit on the ground
draws the pointed, whiskered face
delighted, he feasts

snake!

[Ai Crimson]

I almost stepped on one! I wasn't even scared. Haha!

Dark green and slithers
Fast through the ground and into
The tree to go hide

That's my friend the snake that I almost stepped on. I shall call it Slither. (I know I'm weird.)

Halloween (the movie)

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Halloween Movie
by myself remains unseen;
shivers on my spine

chocolate

[Ai Crimson]

The sweet taste of it
Melts in your mouth with the heat
And slips down inside

This is about chocolate.

Cockroaches

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cute little skitter
as the flee across the floor
cockroach family



pimples (mwa ha ha)